I just copy and paste the same comment I wrote to Attawit Sotyom:
please work on the refinement of your design. There is still much work for you. There are no changes to what I have seen on Thursday.
how does your design interact with the site, and seriously: spatially you should provide more differentiated situations. At the moment it doesn't really matter where I would be in your structure it would look almost the same. For you that would mean to really work on the surface articulation of your design (for surface articulation >>see the comment on Marysol's project) At the moment you don't really help people to navigate/orient through your structure. You really need to figure out what you want the people to do! YOU are the architect, YOU have to have a vision what the people should enjoy here.
I just copy and paste the same comment I wrote to Attawit Sotyom:
ReplyDeleteplease work on the refinement of your design. There is still much work for you. There are no changes to what I have seen on Thursday.
how does your design interact with the site, and seriously: spatially you should provide more differentiated situations. At the moment it doesn't really matter where I would be in your structure it would look almost the same.
For you that would mean to really work on the surface articulation of your design (for surface articulation >>see the comment on Marysol's project)
At the moment you don't really help people to navigate/orient through your structure.
You really need to figure out what you want the people to do! YOU are the architect, YOU have to have a vision what the people should enjoy here.
just a short reminder: it is a playground ;)
Probably it would be a good idea for you to look for a partner and to form a group?
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